Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that parents should educate their offspring to become good citizens whereas others say that teachers at school should be the ones to do this job. While parents have very strong influences on their children, I believe that school is the place that can teach the young the right lessons of morals and behaviors.
On the one hand, people believe that parents should teach their own children because they have bigger impacts than anyone else. This is because every child knows that their parents can give them harsh punishments if they do not obey, therefore, children will listen to whatever their parents tell them. For example, a survey by the University of Social Science in Ho Chi Minh City showed that 30% of young ones in Vietnam learned and forcefully adopted greeting habits from their parents because they were afraid of getting scolded. However, I believe this is not ideal because many parents have wrong perceptions and they might teach their children bad manners and behaviors.
On the other hand, school is the right place for children to learn and become good members of society. This is to say that teachers at school are well-trained and only allowed to give children the right lessons. Hence, children are sure to be guided in the right directions. For instance, the majority of Vietnamese students are taught to give their seats in public places to pregnant women and the elderly whenever necessary while adults at home only tell them to do this when there is a sign. I strongly believe that, compared to parents, school will provide children with the right knowledge and behaviors to make them valuable citizens in society.
In conclusion, despite that children are more afraid and influenced by their parents, the school is where they learn good things which truly help improve their personalities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00977198697 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3522155771 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5182350517 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300902980556 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128076995408 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594792292735 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183244889282 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580746105628 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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