Some people think people should choose their job based on the income in order to provide security to their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job.
What factors should be considered
It has often been argued that if you are earning well, you are capable enough to keep your family out of danger from every aspects of life and in turn happiness is gained. To be very precise, I believe that money plays a vital role when deciding on job. Moreover, factors like stress free environment and job satisfaction are considered to be dissimilar constituents when relying on job.
To begin with, it has commonly been noticed that money is required to buy everything starting from health insurance to a house to live in. There are plethora of reasons when people want to work, where they get enormous amount of money to fulfill their luxury. Moreover, youngsters dream job correlates to lucrative amount of money. For example, a person, who is working in American express, a MNC gets highly paid, however, an employee of basic company like Internet Moguls are not gainful. Thus, in order to fulfill needs and dreams pay scale should be high.
Furthermore, it has been seen while, you have a lot of money, you cannot concentrate because of the pressure created by your top management. All the efforts applied goes in vain and it becomes difficult keep healthy lifestyle. Also, people whose monthly income is beyond expectation are not able to give family time. For instance, a survey done by Times of India, commits that 60% of suicide happens where people cannot handle work pressure. Not only these people suffer from depression but also they fail to explain what is bothering them. Therefore, distinct elements has a binding role to participate in choosing money or job satisfaction.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, who works for money cannot be neglected because it gives all necessity and luxury required. At the same time the health should be kept in mind as it is well said, “health is wealth”.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87458745875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57755986866 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646864686469 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0710593851 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294266634089 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826189064023 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491208949904 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152279750021 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050797073736 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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