Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is believed by many that parents are responsible for making their children well-mannered and enable them to distinguish between right and wrong. While others thought that upbringing in a guarded environment is the utmost duty of parents. In my opinion, the importance of both teaching the right path and moral values as well as giving them care in a secure environment cannot be denied in raising children.
On the one hand, parents need to inculcate discipline in their children's life. As discipline is about teaching children values that they can use to guide them through life. This practice will lead to a healthier emotional life that promotes personality development. For illustration, kids are often encountered by tricky situations at school or with friends, so if children are taught about right and wrong it will give them the courage to take the right decision. Thus, discipline allows children to become emotionally and socially mature adults
On the other hand, Young children imbibe habits from their parents and other caregivers. Safe and stable nurturing relationships for children provide a buffer against the effects of potential stressors. For example, if parents are abusive and fighting all the time, the child may develop a fear of them and act strangely. Therefore, in case of any adverse childhood experience then it would threaten the healthy development of a child by undermining his or her sense of safety and security.
To sum up, parents ought to instill the ability to know what is right and wrong and bring them up in stable relationships which are surrounding them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15267175573 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83342902293 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0075833077 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443464598584 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147307627761 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894915817852 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248142641239 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367707986956 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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