Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, zoos have become one of the favorite picnic spots in most of the cities. However, it is commonly believed by many that zoos are not the perfect place for wild animals. While some other believe that there are good reasons for zoos to exist. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and present my own opinion.
First of all, Yes it is true that wild animal loves their natural habitat and zoos are not proper place to keep them. For example, Elephants and lions love to roam freely in the dense forests rather than performing some scary acts for their spectators. It has observed in the survey report of Harvard University in 2010 that 62 trainers were badly injured or harmed by their animals. These results have proved that animals have not adapted to the artificial or human surrounded environment and they have to be freed or released.
On the other hand, Zoos also hold a significant position among the various entertainment places. People love to spend their holiday with family by visiting zoos as compared to water parks. This place also give opportunity to kids to see and learn about wild animals whom stories they read or essays they write. Also there are large number of people who are dependent on zoo for their living such as the animal trainers, animal doctors, managers and so on.
In my opinion, animals should not be kept in zoos. I also believe that we torture them by separating them from their children in forests. It is also not deniable that animals are hurt and tortured to perform their tasks nicely, which is truly an unkind and brutal behavior toward these innocent creatures.
To conclude, Undoubtedly, zoos are one of the best-loved recreation spot and it offer some benefits such as work opportunity and incredible experience of meeting wild animals but these wild animals would enjoy and love their life better in jungle or their natural habitat so In my opinion, they should not be forced to live in zoo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76539589443 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33108133633 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3186117865 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324134614055 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10948334461 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972675958402 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175621411202 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707122505444 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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