Some people thinks that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals.discuss both views and give opinion.
Some people argue that zoos are merciless and government should take action and close it. While others believe that it can protect endangered species. This essay disagrees that zoos should be closed, instead it will help save the animals. This essay will discuss both points of view.
To begin with, there are many rare animals that needs attention, such as golden monkeys, pandas and red-crowned cranes. Because most zookeppers receive professional training before getting work, they know the lifestyles and diets of the animals according to their needs. Besides, if any animals have diseases, zoos have veterinarians to treat them. As a result, scarce animals can be safeguarded by the zoo. Futhermore, some endangered animals live in forests or other places outside of the zoo, so it could accelerate their extinction rates because of unknown threats to their lives. For instance, environmental degradation could contribute to the destruction of natural habitats, such as deforestation, acid rain and aridity. Moreover, hunters also pose a threat to rare species.
On the contrary, some animals really get mistreated because of inappropriate living environments. According to report, there was a polar bear named 'Winner' that died in zoos in Buenos Aires in 2012 because of the high temperature. Consequently, some animals needed special ambience for their living, namely penguins and polar bears. Eventhough some bad things happen in the zoo, we cannot ignore the way zookeepers and doctors handle them.
To conclude, zoos should not be closed by the local governments because they could protect the rare animals. However, as long as those animals are given the environment similar to their natural habitats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4126394052 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75616902793 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1737162014 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6470588235 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283923338748 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901652599309 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077112216391 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188787827751 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874992880291 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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