You are organizing an executive event for the company you work for. Write a letter to the person in charge of a venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and costs.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about your exclusive seminar hall that we are planning to reserve for an official event.
every year my company ‘Infosys’ organize get together party in which we distribute certificate to the young achievers. Being a party coordinator, I would like to know the availability of your seminar hall during the first week of December. Our agenda for the meetup would be an hour-long presentation then disturbing the certificates to the employee who have achieved followed by the dinner party. For this event, we would require LCD projector and Wi-Fi connection for the laptops. As 100 people are excepted, seating arrangement for them is a must. Extra facilities would also be required like welcome drinks and dinner. Kindly send the quotation of the rates of the hall for 6 hours, that is, from 5pm to 11pm with the list of the facilities it offers. also, send me the menu for dinner including drinks. Please try to give concessional rates for us as it will be every year event. we will not compromise on the food quality and we are excepting the party to be organized without any issue from your end.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Cathy James.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning to reserve for an official event. every year my company 'Infosys&apos...
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Suggestion: Every
...g to reserve for an official event. every year my company 'Infosys' org...
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Suggestion: Also
...h the list of the facilities it offers. also, send me the menu for dinner including ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... for us as it will be every year event. we will not compromise on the food quality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80662189817 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3819175867 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249353490163 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865939280822 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710794766069 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161833021566 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445924085595 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.