Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
Exploring of various type places and enjoying different kinds of foods are very popular nowadays. Some persons are trying new things and activities in their life. On the other hand, some people prefer to stick with their routine, and they do not want to change lifestyle.
Furthermore, I am going to explain both views in this essay. Firstly, some individuals like to spend their life in exploring new things. To cite an example, visit new places, other countries foods, travel to foreign country as well as enhancing new types of interest.
Moreover, it would be beneficial for them to fulfill their dreams. While following these kinds of activities can be helpful as well as challenging.
However, some peoples believe in to keep the things in manners. Also, they are afraid to do the changes in there routing.
Those kinds of person, following the same practices and gives the suggestion to others regarding the implication of the changes. They feel that, visiting new places, they need to spend more money and disproportionate. Consequently, those kind of persons does not follow the trend the new generation.
My viewpoint, regarding the new things, places as well as is positive, I prefer to visit new places. To exemplify, last month I visited a place, which was very strange for me. The name of place is Port Blair which is situated in west side of India.
According to my school of learning, we should visit other unknown places as well as try other continental cousins. While enjoying these things, we can interact and learn other people culture. Also, It would be cognizant for us.
To conclude, it is depend of person thinking and nature. I will definitely enhance the learning and reform of person skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65310264156 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9774081121 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4761904762 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349396980181 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089213949266 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069626541313 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143078560986 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944964691796 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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