Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree
People consider prisoners as a boon to the society. However, there is a school of thought that, changes are inevitable for human beings and after spending life in a prison sinners become good Samaritans who could lead the young generations by advising the serious effects of committing crimes.
To begin with, common man’s concept about prison is that, it is a place occupied by evil people of the society but the scenario in the prison improved ahead of time and nowadays prisoners are supported by social workers and authorities by providing regular counselling, hands on training in skilled occupations and so on. To add more clarity, in one of the famous central jails in India enables the prisoners to get trained and engage in abundant activities such as farming, cooking, carpenting, and so on. The products made by the prisoners are sold in the local market and the profit share is divided and distributed among the prisoners bank account which helps them to start a business or save money for their family when they are relieved from jail.
Furthermore, the involvement of social activists and community workers in prisoner’s life brought immense changes in their personality. Irrespective of the crime they convicted, majority of the sinners confess as well as repent about their immature past crimes. As an example, a famous criminal who was jailed for inhuman rape and murder of young girl transformed in to a saint by the influence of the various classes and counselling provided by the social activist lectures and as a result he works among the youth and started an organisation which helps the people to understand about the serious effects of crime and methods to refrain our mind from engaging in crime.
However, some believes that a sinners does not change their offensive character and could influence the youth in engaging in various criminal activities such as robbery, murder and other social issues. Moreover, there are more chances of creating a community of goons and criminals and attracts younger generation by providing money, drugs and other lavish needs of the youth.
In conclusion, prisoners are also human beings as well as there a plenty of examples to showcase transformation of prisoners into good Samaritans. Although there are some people who continue to live in their criminal background but there are many who transformed in to new person and leading better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sinner' or simply 'sinners'?
Suggestion: a sinner; sinners
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15113350126 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76252950449 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52644836272 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5050089704 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.416666667 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0833333333 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170603575609 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673582069628 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457170370301 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101418117308 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499759887391 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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