Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?
Nowadays gadgets play a huge role in people life. Sometimes people waste too much time on them. There is opinion, that children, teen-ager and students prefer to spend time playing computer games instead of going to the gym or playing active games. I have a feeling that it is true and it can have several reasons.
I suppose that students have plenty of free time to waste it on internet and games, because it is too attractive, so you do not recognise that you have spent several hours in front of screen. Games are created such way, that you want to finish them. Personal computers are cheap and easy to buy at this time. In each family there is computer and using them children become addicted to them. Moreover, parents spend more time at work and allow their children to play games while they are at work. Doing sports requires a lot of affords and child is supposed to be used to do it since yearly years. If parents did not show children how they can spend time on workout, they will not be prefer sports instead of computer games.
I have a feeling that parents are supposed to play important role in habits of their children. Kids take an example with adults, so if parents got used to doing exercises, their children will see it and get used to doing it. Parents must spend more time with children and confine wasting time on computer.
In conclusion, although students tend to enjoy spending time on games on the computer, adults have to teach them doing sports. This things both must take them equal time, than it will not so huge problem at this time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, i suppose, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53521126761 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18106163489 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503521126761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1602776261 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198218378584 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694823262601 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049949467082 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134905637313 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563949932708 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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