Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?
Nowadays gadgets play a huge role in people
life. Sometimes people waste too much time on them. There is opinion, that children, teen-ager and students prefer to spend time playing computer games instead of going to the gym or playing active games. I have a feeling that it is true and it can have several reasons.
First of all, I suppose that students have plenty of free time to waste it on Internet and games, because it is too attractive, so you do not recognise that you have spent several hours in front of the screen. Games are created such way, that you want to finish them. When I was a student I enjoyed one computer game, which was called Zuma and had several levels. I spent five days and five nights playing and trying to finish this game. When I finished I understood that how long I was sitting here and it got me angry with me. Unlikely recent research shows us, that students waste more time with computer then 10 years ago.
Second of all, personal computers are cheap and easy to buy at this time. In each family there is computer and using them children become addicted to them. They tend to play with friends through Internet, make friends there and it does not require big effort like going out and making friends and playing with them in active games. For instance, son of my friends has a lot of friends in Internet, but does not any friends in real life. He spends all free time at home.
I have a feeling that parents are supposed to play important role in forming of the habits of their children. Kids take an example from adults, so if parents are used to doing exercises, their children will see it and get used to doing it as well. Parents must spend more time with children and confine wasting time on computer.
In conclusion, although students tend to enjoy spending time on games on the computer, adults have to teache them to do sports. Workout and playing both must take them equal time, then it will not be such huge problem at this time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48946135831 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14815766036 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480093676815 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2283969897 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.347826087 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205200987445 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630739569246 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049446675355 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110352738846 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528265864886 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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