Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society
Myriad of societies culture have been affected by television. I would say it has both positive and negative impact on the cultural advancement of our society. This essay will first discuss good effects and then later the bad effects on our society of this video box.
Because of television we get to know about the problems in outside world like it aware us about the new disease around the globe. Nowadays children learns many new skills from the educational channel broadcasted on this. Some historical channels gives us the information regarding our history and when young people watch it then they gets to know about our history culture. For example, Zee TV show, office teached us how to build relationships with new and experienced employees at work so most of the problems solved at office by the help of their colleagues or seniors . However, I believe most of people are watching it whole the day and they do not get involves with their neighbours.
Television has many negative effects on our society like one is it separates us from our society and people treat it as their life major part. Because of many options available on this, majority of people spends their huge part of day on it and do not meet their friends or colleagues. With not having proper contact with them for the long time so people used to loose their relationship and it effects them badly in future like when they need someone to support them and their neighbours do not help them. For instance, in metropolitan cities, most of families waste their leisure time in front of the screen and not buildings good relationships with their surrounding people and because of this pessimistic attitude they always shy to take help from them. I believe video box is playing with people emotions and weakening them in real life skills.
Agglomerating all the facts, I would like to ingeminate that society culture can be to betterment when people spends less time watching their television and more time with the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts on our society of this video box. Because of television we get to know about the ...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'give'.
Suggestion: give
...asted on this. Some historical channels gives us the information regarding our histor...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...nd when young people watch it then they gets to know about our history culture. For ...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the help of their colleagues or seniors . However, I believe most of people are w...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...leagues or seniors . However, I believe most of people are watching it whole the day and they ...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...hem for the long time so people used to loose their relationship and it effects them ...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
.... For instance, in metropolitan cities, most of families waste their leisure time in front of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56001579375 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6947795889 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126294078446 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615693006338 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810859492245 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108469124031 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736961009975 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.