There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers, radio, TV, Internet and so on. According to your opinion what is the best media to use? Why?

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There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers, radio, TV, Internet and so on. According to your opinion what is the best media to use? Why?

Getting update about current affairs is a new trend and everyone around the world wants to be updated about news shaping this moment. News is published through different channels such as T.V, radio, newspaper and electronically using internet. The debate is still going on which one is the best to spread the news. In my view, TV is the effective channel to broadcast the news as viewed by millions in comparison to other medium.
In today’s time, people prefer to get information electronically and they have valid reason for same. Firstly, use of technology gives the satisfaction to people that they are going with the latest trends and also increase knowledge about the technology. Secondly, access information using internet is very handy and does not restrict the movement of person. For instance, my uncle who is doctor has to visit so many patients, get the news update on mobile even while traveling in car.
However, everyone in this world is not fortunate enough to have the technology available for usage. Numerous countries especially under developed countries do not have basic infrastructure and having technology infrastructure such as optical fibre and mobile tower etc. which facilitates the communication is still distant dream. African countries like Sudan, Ethopia, congo republic etc. for example, are in disastrous state and people flee regularly for better life. In such scenarios old method like TV, radio seems to be the best medium to make the news present to them. Nevertheless, some people may argue that newspaper is the oldest medium but I believe that other than big cities, transportation is issues and avoiding paper can save many trees.
In conclusion, since T.V provides both audio and visual and has been in use for last three decade, seems to be best choice both for developed and underdeveloped countries. Other technological option like internet is preferred provided facilities are laid down.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21086261981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83026342273 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610223642173 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7254849617 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222808926976 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671514777955 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05632644755 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128917809874 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291000402227 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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