There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measurements will be needed. Discuss both sides.
A sharp rise has been witnessed in the numbers of severe crimes being committed every year. It is considered by some that death sentence is the key to curb this menace, while there are others who believe that it is better to have alternative measures to reduce crime rate. This essay will analyze both points of view of this argument.
On the one hand, many think that deterrence is the best way to refrain people from committing serious offences and death penalty seems to be the most effective deterrent to crime. In the other words, capital punishment creates a fear among offenders as their single act could lead to a loss of their own lives compounded with the destitution of their family members. Take, for instance, Saudi Arabia where the law of death penalty has actually reduced the numbers of misconduct. Thus, supporters of this notion of death warrant have their point proved strong.
However, death penalty is not the only measure to discourage people from indulging in crimes. Intensity of the crime and conditions which force one to offend are also critical while taking a legal action against someone. For example, theft of bread in a bakery and burglary in the bank could not be treated in the same way. Moreover, lack of rehabilitation centers and employment opportunities are key issues in rising crime incidents. Therefore, government should resort to establishing infrastructure and other facilities that will cater the needs of unemployed youth and offenders, giving them constructive earning opportunities and refraining from illegal means of living. Hence, executing the wrongdoers is against the moral values of the society.
In conclusion, certain criminals repeating grave offences may be given death sentence, however moral ways of counseling and rehabilitation of the offenders will prove to be more beneficial for the whole society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21854304636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77904341833 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3452680853 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32967013418 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953276569983 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849640868577 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182676484914 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048983914973 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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