These days science developments have encouraged people to stay upto 100 and 200 years. Some people beleive its a good thing while others say it will create troubles discuss both veiw and give your opinion

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These days science developments have encouraged people to stay upto 100 and 200 years. Some people beleive its a good thing while others say it will create troubles discuss both veiw and give your opinion

Submitted by uzma2011 on Thu, 08/01/2019 - 11:32

It's often argued, latest science inventions have persuade abundant group of citizens to believe in these developments and by utilising them they can stay longer. This essay will shed some light on pros and cons of these creations.

Firstly, to begin with a group of individuals postulate that science technological inventions have gigantic impact on enhancing their life qualities. Newly created formulas are like real miracles by utilising them they can stay longer up to 200 years these inventions are meritorious development. For instance, these days stem cell therapy is very in which claim treatment of various chronic diseases.

On the other hand, few tax payers presume these developments are not real and provides false hopes to patients possess chronic diseases like blood cancer can be treated. This creates a state of conflicts among individuals and they struggle even hard to earn some extra income and save it for future retirements. It also arouse false hopes in dying people.

To recapitulate, I postulate that these inventions and developments are nothing but a business tact to earn huge capital from communities. A balance approach can support users before adopting any newly created medical formulas which they consider as life enhancer.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
Its often argued, latest science inventions have persuade abund...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'persuaded'.
Suggestion: persuaded
... argued, latest science inventions have persuade abundant group of citizens to believe ...
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Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... latest science inventions have persuade abundant group of citizens to believe in...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...cts among individuals and they struggle even hard to earn some extra income and save...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arouses'?
Suggestion: arouses
...save it for future retirements. It also arouse false hopes in dying people. To reca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36180904523 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7581852126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9339183746 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159996830931 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059706945079 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367515878703 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988205338084 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446194752859 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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