Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needsof the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that people nowadays mostly buy useless products because of adverts seen on the television or internet and they do not purchase the things they need. I completely agree because in these days advertising became so much creative that attracts humans to try that product one time and most of endorsement done by the celebrity so people trust them and buy the things they do no particularly need.
There is no denying the fact that advertising at present have most influence on the people mind and they include many creative elements to attracts people to use their products. These advertising agency have a big team only to make the ads look flashy and they always use the present trends into their ads. For example, a famous company in the cold drink, Dew ads promoter use the tagline that ' Darr ke aage Jeet hai' and their company sales got increase suddenly because this line attracted youths . These agencies spends a lot of amount to just make it look trendy.
Another reason why people buy the needless things which they do not need at present is because of the actors who endorsed these products. People purchase products because their favourite star is endorsing for this and they believe that this product is having good quality because of trust mechanism. However, in most of the case products found useless for the person who bought it. For instance , Bournvita ads promoted by Sachin Tendulkar, a famous indian cricketer at starting and he is promoting that this product keep him active so people bought it and started giving to their child but after a long time they came to know that it is not having any elements to keep brain active rather it is unhealthy for their children. I believe that people should buy the product after checking its ingredients and codes.
Aggolomerating all the facts, I would like to ingeminate that people are mostly influence by the creativity used by product promoter and by their favourite celebrities words.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86943620178 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45211357993 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522255192878 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9301416121 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832129019529 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356038657123 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323869816982 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512954072422 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352739327183 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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