When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
In the flow of time technology gradually enhance lives of humans. Inevitably this development leads to a loss of certain skills and changes peoples’ lifestyles. Some people claim that traditional skills and ways of lives should be forgotten as they have no use anymore. However, I am of the opinion that in spite of ultimate modification of human lives due to technological development in many countries, some of the conventional abilities can be preserved as they enrich modern existence.
Undoubtedly, technological development has changed many aspects human lives drastically comparing to the past. New inventions were implemented in order to improve lifestyles in many ways. People are able to travel faster and more comfortable; communication became cheaper, more quick and of a better quality; modern equipment facilitates highly efficient production in agriculture and manufacturing. It’s infeasible that humanity would come back to less convenient, uncomfortable , time and resources consuming methods of leading a life. In other words, with the technological advancements traditional lifestyles will be replaced by modern ones and consequently disappear. For instance, plugs virtually had ceased being used after invention of machinery such as combines. As a result, less people are involved in agricultural works, crops became cheaper and more affordable for the majority of global population.
However, some of the past activities can be practiced for different purposes than they used to be. For example, horse riding was a primary way of transportation a century ago. So people had to learn how to ride them in order to be able to travel. Currently, people use automobiles, planes and railways to reach a certain destination and ,therefore, don’t need to obtain horse riding skills. Nevertheless, riding houses remains a popular sport activity for adults and children all around the world. There are many schools and clubs where amateurs and sportsmen master and develop their ability to ride a horse. As a result, this skill has successfully been preserved and still used in twenty-first century.
To conclude, although up-to-date technologies have significant impact on human’s lifestyle and lead to an extinction of some conventional ways of living, I believe some of the traditional skills can be conserve and kept in use, as they contribute greatly into national culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54200542005 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22091525904 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9780616029 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.631578947 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881251014833 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289100219259 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302696014526 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590338513656 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248092421899 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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