While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Few people deem that one of the most significant environmental issues is global warming which we are facing at present, however, I believe that deforestation has more deleterious implications on our planet. While global warming rises overall temperature of the earth, contamination of air occurs in the absence of trees.
On the one hand, temperature of planet is increasing incessantly due to global warming. This is because, as the green house gases which are by-product of industries augment, they will absorb more heat. Consequently, glaciers of south and north will be melted and sea level will be risen because of that countries around seashore will be in jeopardise. For example, a scientific study showed that half of the land of the nations will be covered by ocean water in next hundred years. However, I believe that there is still some time to solve this problem, therefore, priority should be given to the crisis of deforestation.
On the other hand, trees are inhaling carbon dioxide and exhaling oxygen which is essential to purity air. That is to say that, if the more number of trees will be cut then air pollution will be increased. As a result, it will be arduous for men and women to survive in that egregious situation. Moreover, rainfall patterns are also affected due to deforestation which is undesirable for any nations. To exemplify, scarcity of rain could be seen in the east Africa because of deforestation. Therefore, I strongly believe that cutting down trees has more pernicious impact on our planet.
In conclusion, though, earth is becoming warmer globally, purification of air as well as adverse effects on rain should be addressed which are the causes of deforestation. Furthermore, it is recommended that every countries should take initiative in order to resolve global crisis.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12080536913 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96402768449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7316360728 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237016663425 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073482065913 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067044088051 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146213836141 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086967760595 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.