You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter:
– Explain why you would like the job
– give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
– say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the job of a caregiver for your baby. I have gone through the recruitment advertisement published in a Central magazine which is popular in Australia.
It was advertised in the magazine that you require someone who can take care of your half-year-old kid. I have pursued a diploma in child care and attended several seminars on infant care. Therefore, I thought this the right opportunity to use my knowledge by rendering professional service.
Moreover, after obtaining practical training during the diploma, I have also acquired experience of babysitting. I have served the seven families for the past seven years and they have appreciated my work. Apart from this, I am an easy-going person and easily blend with the small children which makes me an appropriate applicant for the job.
Actually, I am coming on six months visitor visa to have some quality time with my sister on 20th June 2020. So, I will pass my time visiting different places during that time. In addition to this, if you offer me the job, I may not only earn some money but learn about a new culture.
Hoping for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Rhea
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96097560976 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79054236848 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9724061195 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2307692308 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267242872844 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789698147813 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534138968056 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131383963751 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302580433239 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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