I am writing to you requesting a change of accommodation preferences as soon as possible. I have tried to accommodate through various means, however it is unlikely for my roommate to abide by any change. Thus, an alternative accommodation would be the best solution.
Due to my various academic courses, I spend majority of my time spending. It is difficult to study while my roommate watches television or plays loud music. He fails to abide by any of my rules, hence I feel uncomfortable while preparing for an exam or completing assignments. Secondly, I am not comfortable to clean up a dirty room of soiled clothes, food, and trash. He does not like to maintain a clean environment.
I am considering a separate room with no roommates.I would like the room to be near my campus and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and accommodation arrangement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ering a separate room with no roommates.I would like the room to be near my campu...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...to be near my campus and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and ac...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and accom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2625075564 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.633766793 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111573018421 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415987484862 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509848498834 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833704556717 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453743024332 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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