10."When people succeed in life, it is because of hard work. Being lucky has nothing to do with success in life." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of people who succed in life by their hard work or by luck. If i were forced to choose, i would definitely say that hard work is the basis of success. It is my firm belief for a number of reasons, and i will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, hardwork is the engine for each of us. If we want to be rich, we need to work very hard to achieve our goals. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter, has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my friend was from poor family, but he wanted to be a millionaire before his twenty. So as he knew that there were 2 years untill his twenty, he started to work enormously hard. As a result after a year he opened his first firm which is a vehichle repair firm, and started his small business. Now it is a successful project, with two millions of dollars profit for a year. For this reason I think that hardworking is the most important thing in our life.
Secondly, self education also an important thing i, which is also a part of hardworking. If you want to have a high salary or be smart, you need to learn a new thing every simple day. Drawing from my own experience,i wanted to be a good programmer. I took some classes but they didn't make me a programmer. Then i started to study myself, by finding new materials for it. Moreover i texted my questions on the internet platforms, to get answers to them. Its certainly clear to see that if you want to be successful, you need to work very hard.
To make a long story short, in light of above mentioned questions, i strongly belief that if a person works hard, he will be a good specialist or really a man with great ambitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28228228228 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52305156757 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1649277985 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0526315789 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161993162797 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482648119275 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432896112003 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102605724551 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158243067526 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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