102. Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of using machines or doing work by hand. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to use machines. It is my firm belief for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, machines do the work more productively. Although people made that machines, but they can do the work better than people. There are many types of machines, which help us to do the work easily. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my father bought an electrical saw for me, because I was making wood boxes for florists. In that time and age I tested the waters, it was something new and unusual for me. I started made the boxes easily, therefore I spent less energy on it. As a result I constructed the boxes more productively, because all the boxes are ideal. For this reason I think that using machines is much more effective, than do it on your own.
Secondly, by using machines you save a plenty of time. For instance if the man do the work in five minutes, the machine do the same work in three minutes. It is very significant to spend less time on such things, because today’s the most expensive thing is the time. We can buy everything, but time, never. Drawing from my own experience, when I was making the boxes, I was late for school every day. But after my father bought that electrical saw for me, I was always in time, furthermore, I climbed the corporate ladder of my own company. Moreover I spent more time on my lessons. It is certainly clear to see, how machines can help you to save time, and as we all know- the time is money.
To make a long story short, in light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that using machines is better, because it makes your job easier, and helps you to save time, which is the most important things in our days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... time. We can buy everything, but time, never. Drawing from my own experience, when I...
Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...the corporate ladder of my own company. Moreover I spent more time on my lessons. It is ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45303867403 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50285542496 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522099447514 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3568989972 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7619047619 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208475040374 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709957686624 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813512896777 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143322177128 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592768234413 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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