In today's modern world, with its galloping progress in technology and veriaty kinds of information that humans are dealing with all days and nights, brings this question to the light that it is essential how to manage these phenomenan or not. Some people believe that there is no need to take effort to organaze and plan this circumstance but in my perspective its essential to have the ability to plan and organize. I feel this way for some reasons which are pinpointed in the following.
First, no doubt that nowadays lots of recent maters are facing with young people as a result of technology and modernate in other word life styles have been more alaboreted so young people oblige to improve their ability of organizing issus. For instance, in the past time most of people had common life styles, they didnt need to graduate in university or learn how to work with computers and other things.They just follow their ancestors job,got marrid and had babies but these days variety ways that young people have make them confuse so its vital to hande and manage them.
Second, easy access to sources of information and diffrent oppotunities lead to complex individual's life also its common that young people compete with each other. Most of people whether or not gain fundamental abilities such as drive car or how to use cellphones Therefore young people have to set goals and plan to recieve them in the long run and not to loose their ways.To illustrate my point, some years ago when i graduted from university, i couldn't choose my appropriate job because in my majer there are lot of branches so i organize and plan to find suitable job.
In conclusion, by taking account all the above reasons and many others, i strongely believe that in recent decades its fundamental to young people that organize their goals to succeed since there are lots of sources and more talented people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4916922317 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.5973072118 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.125 100.406767564 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.625 20.6045352989 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.45110844103 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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