74.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Because it might be ambiguous of the phrase "tour guide", here I would define it narrowly as the tour guide hired through a travel agency. Now from two of my personal experiences, I would totally disagree with this argument. For a more enjoyable travel, I would highly recommend a DIY trip and avoid any tour guides.

First of all, hiring a tour guide would be much more expensive compared to a DIY trip. The extra cost consists of not only the money used to hire an additional tour guide but also that of schedule making, hotel booking and some other fees paid to the travel agency. It may be acceptable if there is only the cost of hiring a tour guide. However, most parts of the extra fees lie in the other aspects. For the schedule making, so hard could it be measured that the travel agency could charge whatever it wants, as long as there are tourists enrolling in, which will not be a problem, because of the massive tourism in my country, China. Equally difficult to measure is the cost of living. Usually these kinds of agencies will arrange all the meals and accommodations for us, which may seem convenient, at first glance, but in fact with an outrageous price. They would not find the most economical hotels and restaurants for us but instead those having a commercial cooperation with them. These hotels and restaurants are typically expensive yet with unworthy conditions. Apparently, the tourists enrolling in the travel group organized by these travel agencies are the major source of their profits. To this unreasonable price is also added a tour guide's swaying tourists into making purchases. Once my family traveled in one of these groups, where a tour guide kept advertising a kind of ornament by pretending to introduce the culture of it while we were in the bus. Then after the bus stopped, we found that it took us into a market, where my father almost made the payment under the tour guide's continuous advertising, which was really compelling because it even persuaded me at first into believing its mysterious efficacy like bringing good luck and keeping good health. Nevertheless, this kind of commercial advertising is still so inflammatory that most people could not resist making an unwise purchase. Therefore, it would be very costly to travel in a group led by a tour guide, especially when he/she happens to be a skilled advertiser.

Some may value more the convenience but less the money and thus still credit the way of traveling in a group led by a tour guide. However, the truth is that they will never enjoy more convenience from it. At the same journey where my dad almost got cheated, we had to get up very early--around 7--in the morning, in order to catch up with the schedule. And our time was almost filled, including even the evening. And in every place of interest, we also had to move hastily. When this trip was over, we all got exhausted. On this account, those who favor a more pleasant journey should instead organize their own. If they worry less about money, they could even extend the period, so that they can have more time for each place without always visiting in a rush, which is completely inconvenient.

On the other hand, on a DIY trip, no restriction on time or places is imposed, providing us with great freedom to visit whatever we like at any time. After that unpleasant trip with the tour guide, we went on a trip again the next year, but this time, it was a DIY trip. During that time, we did not have an exact schedule, but only a rough plan. We finished visiting one place when we felt that all the spots had been discovered, during which we walked, of course, at a slow pace. We did not have to get up early and move hastily, so that was indeed a very enjoyable trip. Every day we had a great time without feeling tired, even on the last day of the trip. As a result, we never go to any travel agency from then on. Therefore, a DIY trip is a better, if not the best, way to travel.

In sum, there are many disadvantages of traveling in a group organized by a travel agency, such as the unreasonable cost and the over-filled schedule. Admittedly, it might save us some time making the schedule, while that does not necessarily lead to a pleasant journey. To find the best way to travel, why not DIY your trip? You could have the greatest freedom to spend your vacation and find your most favorable way to travel.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, in fact, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 52.1666666667 196% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3618.0 1977.66487455 183% => OK
No of words: 786.0 407.700716846 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60305343511 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29487408139 4.48103885553 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54804337495 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 350.0 212.727598566 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445292620865 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1142.1 618.680645161 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8324578485 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2105263158 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07894736842 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162002585775 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459685261832 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546265486173 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105075387226 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451317085349 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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