the ability to maintain friendship for a long period of time with small friends is important than making many friends easily
In the modern era, friendship is regarded as a crucial factor contributing to the thriving of individuals and communities. one of the heated debates in this realm is associated with the question of what kind of friends people can feel happy with. Many people adhere to the view that making new friends enable us to have gratification, while others believe that keeping a small number of friends for a long period is essential for one's happy life. In what follows, I will identify the most conspicuous reason to justify my point of view.
The first point to be mentioned is that friends from old days can help us to overcome a lot of difficulties. when we face difficulties especially family relationship or financial distress, some levels of reliability is necessary to share them with a friend. Usually a friend from old days know our personalities and sympathize with our pain. For instance, when I struggled with my family problem, one of my old schoolmates showed his sympathy and encouragement. I could tell him my feeling honestly, which made me feel much better. I assumed that I could show my weakness and tell the truth story to him because I am relying on him for a long time. As this example illustrates, having close friends is able to help to overcome difficulties and bring one's happy life.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that being with a friend for a long time allow us to behave naturally more than being with a friend who I know a little. In general, people can expect how a friend will react to a thing each time through a great understanding of of each other strengths, flaw, personalities, hobbies, etc. this expectation enables us to behave naturally without any considerations about the level of politeness. my personal experience is a compelling example. I have a close friend knowing for over 20 years. through sharing a huge amount of time with him, I am sure that he understands me deeply too. Thus, I can keep my natural behaviour expressing my intrinsic feelings. having this kinds of mate makes my life happy by adding the feeling of having a good supporter for me. On the other hand, being with the other friend who I recently met, I need to pay attention to avoid being rude to him although I know that his personality is great and friendly. Therefore, my anecdotal experience highlights that the comfortable feeling from a casual attitude gives people one's happiness.
In brief, contemplating all the reasons, one soon realises that the ability to keep friendship with a small number of people for a long period is more important to our happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in brief, in general, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80666666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89413967259 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5630806055 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3181818182 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332882112482 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087928477155 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877344970085 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225351862448 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456523663734 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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