Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for

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Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

The interaction among the nations across the world is very important to solve global issues, maintain peace in the world and for many other reasons. Every nation has its own representative or party to handle its nation, but there are some situations in which the communication between these representatives of different countries is crucial for the betterment of human life and the of the world.

Before the progression of science and technology, many years ago, people used birds for the interaction between two regions. they used to write a letter and send it through the bird like pigeons. It took several days or even a year sometimes to reach the message and return it. As advances it transportation took place, the way nations communicate and interact with each other is totally different and more effective. Some examples are an airplane, telephone, fax, email and so on.

Another technological innovation that I think important is video conferencing. I believe that telephones, email, airplane are not as sufficient and reliable as video conferencing and there are some reasons behind the same.Firstly, if someone uses the telephone, it may be possible that someone tapes the conversation. So, it turns out to be harmful if the conversation is about some secret talk or confidential information. Secondly, if emails are used, then some hackers may hack email address and hence the information may be leaked or someone uses that email address for his/her own personal gain. Additionally, if the airplanes are used as transportation, then it is not always true that weather is convenient for flight, and if it is not, then important meeting has to be cancelled. Apart from that, the route may be busy for flight. If the airplane is used, then it means that the people who will be the part of the conference or meeting, will come to a place from different places around the world. This may not be convenient for all the persons.

For all these reasons, video conferencing is much more effective and less time-consuming option. There are some specific reasons for choosing this option. Firstly, in video conferencing, each member can see all other members' face. So there will be no chance of misinterpretation or no scope of unreliability. Secondly, no one has to go to one common place and hence, it saves time of everyone. All the members can talk to more than one person from anywhere at any time. Thirdly, there is no fear of leaking confidential data. Moreover, people who are the part of the video conferencing may present their ideas through images, charts or even with video or presentation.

Thus, according to me, video conferencing is a much better way to interact with other nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, apart from, as to, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99778761062 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97644165243 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506637168142 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0561319621 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203572209062 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059055115614 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746110015935 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122868651215 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410208748192 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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