Advertising can tell you a lot about a country?
In the modern contemporary, for selling products and tempting people to buy dispensable goods, they need to using some tricks to persuade people get that. With this regard, digital technology with ornamental videos helps factories to sale their product to consumers. In the today’s, no one can deny role of advertising to get considerable income for companies. There is a question, is advertising can tell about country? I agree about this idea and will explain with clarify reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, in the contemporary, advertising using visual effects and decorative goods to more sales, and a lot of people are intriguing them to spend more money to get significantly benefit. One of practical way they utilize to tempting them using shapes and layouts more commonly in the consumers’ country, when a thing very widespread and prevalent among people, they are more familiar with these products. This connection between in people and product tend them to buy products. On the other hand, the stranger products can prompt people to ignore products. Some ways the companies are using decorative products which are made with shape of historic place or a popular fruit to made bridge between people and products. For example, in the chines, using plan dragon on their goods, because the people of chines in the thousands year in a lot generations using dragon indication of power and fine, and then every product is decorated with this tricks, which are one of indication of one country, conveniently them are sold.
Secondly, in every country, in the between people ubiquitously make some proverbs and verses of well-known people in their daily conversations. Every proverb, in every country, shows specific characteristics of behaviors and hobbies of people, and these sentences which are said remembered beautiful occurrence among people, also is recalled who made or written it. When advertisement companies observe the respectfully behavior of people confronting with this sentence, companies are persuaded to use it in the advertises, also they must use this proverb with artistic way to appeal people to buy their products. One way a company making, using name of their product or name of their company instead of some words of proverb professionally. Therefore, the advertisements are watched with people realizing that it is inspired from this proverb like this advertise, and admire the company which are making it. Furthermore, may be the people try that their impression about the program tell others, spontaneously, their product can be famous and popular without using additionally expense.
All in all, companies try to make advertises not only adapted with culture but also inspired from popular proverbs. As a result, important benefits of relation between advertises and country, people more familiar with their country, and it is never forgotten among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: need to use
...g people to buy dispensable goods, they need to using some tricks to persuade people get that...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'thousands'' or 'thousand's'?
Suggestion: thousands'; thousand's
...ds, because the people of chines in the thousands year in a lot generations using dragon ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd then every product is decorated with this tricks, which are one of indication of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar without using additionally expense. All in all, companies try to make advert...
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Suggestion:
...and it is never forgotten among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2448.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90937703421 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.049582594 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.842105263 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134218527957 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686982571908 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13898083893 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10074031603 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670954995933 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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