If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study. What would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Everyone in his or her life prefer doing something which has either never done before or not had opportunities to do this. Also, providing a condition for people to choose a subject for studying, they try learn something is very more intriguing for them. Therefore, If I could study a subject, I would choose that medicine subject. Since I wish learn medicine subject, I were very interested this subject in my college but I chose another subject for my future life. I will explain my reason about this choice hereunder.
First and foremost, throughout the world, more people are suffered form proverty condition where is deprived from suitable facilitate such as education, recreational, and curing. When learning medicine subject for being a sophisticated doctor, I can travel some region for visiting sick people around the world to treatment them. Therefore, I think that more professional samphthy doctors in the world leads to less patients suffer dangerous disease. As statistically in Asian countries, many doctors in a country can confine illnesses in the country.
Secondly, nowadays, in every realm of sciences has some weakness of progress, hence people must strive to improve the boundary of science to reach zenith of this. I am feeling in the medicine science has some shortage of improvements, and then If I could study medicine science, I would try to find breakthrough in this field to help the people. For example, many lethal diseases have not sufficient ways for remedy and many people are dineg with shortage of drugs or correct surgery operations. My goal is exploring the edge of medicine science to people conveniently are treated without any mortality.
All in all, I think medical science is best subject for study, because not only I help the poverty people around world with my knowledge, but also I can figure out way for curing people suffered fatal diseases without feeling any pain.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun patients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74212649802 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5831600861 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104860198594 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458461443021 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630736589351 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612064419635 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591816053806 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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