Nowadays, most students would like to attend college before making a living in modern society. And some people argue that students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they go to college. Personally, I do not wholeheartedly agree with this opinion, and I believe it depends on their future studying field.
For students majoring in engineering, I think there is no requirement to waste a year off from university. My experience is an excellent demonstration of my stance. I majored in computer science during my college years. And my passion was to be a software developer, which required me to excel in many kinds of programming languages like Java and Python. And from my perspective, it could not be better for me to master such programming knowledge via schooling since there were so many brilliant classmates working with me. We shared the same goal so that we would support each other without spare. Besides, thanks to the great Internet, I could collect data or information via telecommunications when I was puzzled by some difficulties. Therefore, I think engineering students could practice their professional skills and make academic progress without face-to-face communications. And one year off is merely wasting precious time.
For students majoring in the humanities or art, I think they should take a vacation to pursue connections with others. Since the essence of these sorts of subjects is human-bing itself, literary students could not vividly depict a detailed story and characterize classic roles without personal observations. No matter how talented they are, it is still insurmountable for art students to imagine and have inspiration without a concrete basis. Furthermore, human is a complicated kind of creature who creates society as complex as human nature itself. The complex essence contributes to varieties of concentrations within every social science, which requests the young to spend time to find their own passions or destinations. So it is perfect for them to do some research concerning of their desires before actually participating in such a study.
In conclusion, I do not fully support the statement that all students should take a one-year vacation before university studying. It is their field of study that decides the answer to this question.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, as to, at least, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25606469003 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10905897377 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592991913747 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6391964202 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23912339171 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681663918544 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111848013091 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173157093172 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109526876455 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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