Agree of disagree Telling truth is better than lying under any circumstances

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Agree of disagree_ Telling truth is better than lying under any circumstances.

A glance at lying issues brings a light queston that has several times provoked discussions, that is, wheter lying is alwasy bad or can be accepted in a certain circumstances. Some people contend that no one should lie to anyone, obviously from their family and friends even to a non-related strangers that people have to encounter in their life. However, I would like to suggest the possibility of beneficai aspect of lying, in terms of relational goals and one's safe daily life. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned firstly is that you can avoid hurting your significant others by adequate lying. My personal anecdote will well demonstrate this point of view. When I met my hight school friends after several years of graduations, I was stunned by her appearance. It was crystal clear that she got around 20kg more on her weight than when she was in her age of 19. Nevertheless, I did not make songle comment on weight. Instead, I tried to share my past and present lives as normal. This is basially because telling about how other people look on the outside is rude. By this actions of not telling the truth, I could avoid an awkward situation.
Another point to be mentioned is that sometimes it is dangerous to tell truth, especially if it is related to personal and private information. For example, there is a shitty culture among Korean me of asking women's phone number in the street, just because they like to talk or sent message to them. In this case, many women refuse to give the number or even fake the number. This is because they do not want their personal informations to be invade, and they don't have any kind of responsibility to tell entire truth to complete strangers.
Although the foregoing points do cross the mind at first sight, it does not mean that they are the only one. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. It should be noted that lying can help your promotion in your company and inhance the montly payment that you are getting. There is a research that proves this statement. A group of phychiatrist investigated two groups of people on the relationship between their honesty toward emotional expression and their salary. The result showed that people who used to hide their emotions or expressed only the minimum amount of it tend to earn better than those who did truthfully showed how they feel about a certain issue.
Due to the above mentioned ground, I firmly belive that lying can be useful and beneficial, especially for the sake of easygoing social life and one's safety, plus for the money one gets.

Average: 10 (4 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74255319149 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5787980117 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3415596596 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9130434783 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136364408596 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315455514342 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429519142546 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654884335232 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201333588083 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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