AGREE OR DISAGREE
It is important to keep your old friend than it is to make new friends.
Relationship is very essential in our lives, and one of the most important groups that surround us is our friends. Personally, I believe that keeping old friend is important as much as making new friends. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, our old friends understand our personalities and characteristics very well, so they can help us when we face difficulties in our lives. Moreover, we share the same interests with our old friends, so this makes us comfortable when we interact with each other. My personal experience is a compelling example of this aspect. I have a friend since we were in high school, and our relation is very strong. In fact, I don’t imagine how difficult my life would be without him. He stands beside me in every hard time I have been through, and I could not forget his favor on me when I made a big decision in my career and, unfortunately, it was a wrong one. He did all that he could to help and encourage me. In situation like that one, we can understand the importance of old friends, and how it is difficult to the new friends to satisfy this need.
On the other hand, new friends are important because we can get the opportunity to know more about different perspective in life. As a result, we could enhance our understanding towards things around us. In addition to that, new friends could make us to feel the dynamic of the life itself, so we would be more able and acceptable to experience new things.
To conclude, I think old friends and new friends are equally important in our lives. This because old friends understand us very well, and because new friends show us the diversity of the opinion in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6038961039 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73303928083 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516233766234 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5115028963 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263844923215 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109589321991 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133657585102 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207480438773 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672553248771 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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