agree or disagree, movies and televisions have more negative effects
Leisure time to relax is an important part of life for individuals. Today people have a variety of ways to spend those time, especially like watching movies and televisions. However, despite some good things about these two recreations, they actually caused more negative effects on young people's behaviors.
Firstly, movies and televisions lead people to live a more sedentary lifestyle. Before we have these techlonogy, young people were more likely to go out playing with friends and have different activities, such as hiking, play sports or games. I remembe when I was a little girl, my father bought a television for the first time. Since then television became my favorate playmate, I cannot wait for every evening when I could watch all kinds of interesting programs, actually most of them were just soap operas. But I couldn't move to do anything else but got glued with the screen. Consequently, caused some troubles between me and my mother, and also my father was unhappy that watching too much TV affected my eye vision. So I would say this sitting lifestyle are not healthy to body and cause troubels in family members.
Secondly, movies and televions could cause premature for the children. What we have been seeing on screens are not always what really fit us age and situations. While this powerful medie could present all kinds of people and events in front of all people no matter if the audience has the good judgement about it or not. For example, many children can tell us a lot of actors' or actress's names and share with how much they like them or hate them. Many children could imitate their models' behaviors too, like, smoking, getting hair colered or even addicted to drug if it is possible. These are just few examples. From the media we can tell there are a lot more reports or phenomenon like these.
Admittedly, there are many good effects from these entertainments too, such as, we can get various information and important news. We can be feel really relaxed and so on. But comparing to the negative effects which widely happened to almost every person, these positive effetct are becoming less and less.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...st of them were just soap operas. But I couldnt move to do anything else but got glued ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87397260274 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51830752126 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621917808219 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5233266157 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.95 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177050925975 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497226291377 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592736359212 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108753460165 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445308432485 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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