arts and athletics
Government always plays a very important role in how to make financial decisions that is beneficial to the society and the future of a country.Ｎo matter it is art or athletic, it is significant part of our daily life. Governments invest a lot of money on events like Olympics, but there is anything like that when it comes to arts. So I certainly believe that arts deserve more financial support from government.
Firstly, arts education in schools should be valued more by government than it is now. From the primary school until university, it seems like the main subjects, like Chinese, Math, English, are the most important. Art classes, like painting or music, only once a week and are kind of ignored by teachers or educators. Partly because it is costly to buy all the equipment and also the investment to cultivate arts teachers are expensive. If government could invest more money on instruments, constructions and offer more support, like scholarships for the arts students, it would improve the situations much better. Since government and institutions always has money to build gyms, large playgrounds for different kinds of sports, they should have money to invest arts more.
Secondly, government should also invest more money to build more non-profitable arts institutions for the public. Humans love arts. Everyone loves music, for example, and they should have more accesses to learn to sing or dance or learn a specific instrument. But except registering a private institution, people don't have some other better or economical options. If government can provide more resources, no matter more volunteer teachers or more public affordable schools, it would be benefit ordinary people very much. Moreover, government supports arts is also supporting people’s well-being and mental strength, because arts are crucial spirit nutrients for each human being that would lead a person toward inner peace and fulfillment.
Admittedly, sports also play an indispensable part in our lives. Because everybody knows that, we emphasize it more and that’s why in school students have PE class several times a week. Also the society has different kinds of events or games that supported by the government. That’s why we forgot that arts also play a very important role in our lives and in a nation, in the history and in the future. More specifically, without the arts of architecture and famous artists whose light shining for centuries, there would be no such attractive Roma. Without the Renaissance, there would be no profoundly influence on Italy, Europe and even the world for hundreds of years. All in all, no arts, there would be no culture, no civilization and no human history.
To conclude, arts are invaluable spiritual treasure for all of us. I definitely agree that government should put more efforts and investments on arts. It is good for students but also beneficial to citizens and the country, even to mankind history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2488.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2050209205 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88576468574 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514644351464 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1813412816 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.52 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.12 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1565322357 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552844983882 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594044772675 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104826821229 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362067221959 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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