Government always plays a very important role in how to make financial decisions that is beneficial to the society and the future of a country. In modern society, internet has been becoming an indispensable part of human's life. While infrastructures, like the public transportations, are even more basic and more important for people’s lives and deserve more financial support. So I disagree with the statement above, but agree that government should spend more money on improving public transportation to meet everybody’s the very basic requirement.
First, a good public transportation system would definitely improve people's life standards. Especially, to a rural area or many undeveloped, remote territories, the transportations are essential to their development. Only with the improvement of transportation, they could have access to the outside and connect with the unknown and wider world. Consequently, more businesses could happen, more opportunities to improve the local people’s income. Undoubtedly, with the convenient transportations, people’s life standard could reach a new level. Take the Chinese rural area or even my own village, few years ago, we finally had a better road connecting with town because of government’s financial support. With more people own cars, it is so efficient to go to towns and cities. So life became much easier. On the other hand, internet access became more accessible as well.
Second, public transportations are like a concrete internet, connecting people from all different areas and bring various possibilities no matter it is economic, cultural or educational field. Moreover, good public transportations would tremendously improve efficiency in trade and traveling and ordinary life. For example, the city where my college located still depends on the old style trains as main public, long distance transportation. By contrast, many cities, especially first-tier cities, have developed all kinds of transportations, metro, highway train, airplane, bustling bus system and abundant taxi services. All these in return brings back countless economic benefits and incredibly improves efficiency.
Admittedly, Internet access is also a crucial resource for humans. It brings us unimaginative possibilities to do a wide variety of things, from get information to have online courses, from entertainments to work. That’s why government haven been paying so much attention to and invested a huge amount of money on internet. So, it’s time for government to consider doing more for public transportation.
To conclude, good public transportations not only can improve people’s living standards, but also improve a nation’s economy, help different areas develop in a more balanced way. I confidently believe it is a great thing for government to do to put more money on improving public transportations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iety, internet have increasely becoming a indispensable part of humans life. Whil...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly they can have a good road, they have a access to the outside, no matter do a b...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...ly they can have a good road, they have a access to the outside, no matter do a business...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'trained'.
Suggestion: trained
...r example, my college is still only has train, the old style train with low speed. By...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...source for humens too. It helps us have a unimaginative possiblities to do a wide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47648902821 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23965380362 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7916645604 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364567601165 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105798740091 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800017146118 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193515909093 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687669306483 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.