Needless to say that it is essential to know what’s happening globally. Human beings now live on this planet which seems to become smaller and smaller. Simultaneously, connections between countries become tighter and tighter. Personally, to be well-informed could profoundly benefit us both in knowledge and in life.
Firstly, being exposed to the world could effectively broad our horizons and minds. While we are watching international news, we are not only informed about a specific event, but also learning about a new culture, new language, different lifestyle and arts. This cognition of cultural diversity develops an open-minded character and become more appreciated to various cultures. It also helps us become more adaptable and flexible when we encounter with foreign cultures overseas.
Moreover, keeping on top of global new information could be quite helpful for decisions making in life. As we realized that modern people’s lives no longer limited in a small area forever. It is more and more popular traveling all over the world, if we can, and it is more and more common for students to receive different education in foreign countries. That requires us to pay more attention about what’s going on outside of the country. If not, we could make some wrong decisions. For example, some people made unnecessary, even dangerous trips without knowing the newest information about coronavirus which is still spreading around the world. Many students made trips to universities without having access to classrooms.
Some may say it is a waste of time watching news that seems to have no influence on our daily lives. It may be true if we focus on something like celebrities’ personal events. But we may also be entertained by those stories or gain a little wisdom from it. Some events seem to have no connection with our lives, like US presidential election. However, as I explained, it is still a good opportunity to learn something about a country. More knowledge is much better than ignorance. Philosophically, the world is universally connected as a whole.
To conclude, no matter for personal knowledge reason, or for important decisions making, it is very important and valuable for us to know more information and more events that happening outside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e helpful for decisions making in life. As we realized that modern people’s lives ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23705722071 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96299945971 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574931880109 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8679116466 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5652173913 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9565217391 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145763756395 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374536620339 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458885990509 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826575688317 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274951747485 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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