Some people think that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by....
Among all the famous universities in the world, some are big and even spread to different cities, while some are small and almost bried in a jungle or stand by a river. No matter how big the size is, it is really more about what purposes our education intend to achieve, which is a huge determinator of unversities' success I believe. To reach different goals of different talents, I personally believe large colleges and universities could provide students better education experience.
Firstly, large universites are more likely to provide more majors, activities and opportunities which could meet almost every student's needs. Universities are capable of providing different kinds of choices for students because they possess so many resources, from basic educational constructions to technogical equipments, from best professors to international serminars or events. Moreover, they have more opportunities to cooperate with different universities, provide exchange programs or more chances of future careers. For example, my university is big with total 5 campus, located in 2 cities, our school can provides us possibilities to further persue our education in Australia directly after graduation because the 2 schools have a certain cooperations. On the contrary, my college school, small one, cannot offer us that, even is not sufficient in some good dorms for students.
Secondly, big universities probably have much more diversities comparing to smaller ones. The diversity in students, because different majors gravitate all kinds of students with different talents, backgrounds and personalities. Meet so many different people and exchange different perspectives would be a very interesting and benificial thing to appreciate. Also, we could experience a lot of different activities together.
To conclude, I definitely think that large universities and colleges could provide students better education experience and cultivate more diverse sutdents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the best'.
Suggestion: from the best
...onstructions to technogical equipments, from best professors to international serminars o...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...us, located in 2 cities, our school can provides us possibilities to further persue our ...
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Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'co-operation', 'cooperation'?
Suggestion: co-operation; cooperation
...on because the 2 schools have a certain cooperations. On the contrary, my college school, sm...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... backgrounds and personalities. Meet so many different people and exchange different perspecti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at large universities and colleges could provide students better education experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74315068493 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17259172343 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0524068894 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34766266323 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118438532301 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100834148881 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238057890662 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10615759838 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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