Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student. Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience. Which view do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, people have a lot more chances to choose which types of schools they are going to enter. Some prefer larger universities while others are more willing to go to a small college. However, even though both large university and small college have their own advantages, I insist that students should give priority to large universities.
To begin with, large universities enable students to make more friends which is essential for their future development. Take my father as an example. When he was young, he got a chance to study in Wuhan University, an all-rounded school which has various excellent majors. During his four-year undergraduate career, he made countless friends from different majors. After his graduation, he established a company. At first, he was quite struggled because his company involved several aspects but he just had knowledge about one specific field. Then he turn to his university friends. It worked. His friends made great contributions to his company and now the company is quite profitable. Imagine that if my father chose to study in a small campus, he would not get the chance to make friends from different major, his company would not success as well.
Moreover, students are more likely to learn much knowledge in large university. I major in biology in a large university. Our university involves more than one hundred majors. Communication between different fields are quite prevalent in our campus. Once I had a chance to do a project with a professor. Even though the project is about agricultural science, after finishing the project, I surprisingly noticed that I had learned varieties of knowledge from the project since many specialists from other fields had join us. In contrast, small universities would not be capable to involve various of majors, which means that students would lost the chances to learn more.
Admittedly, it is true that students in small school are more likely to be offered more individual attention. But students in the large universities also acquire almost the same individual attention as the small school students' since students in large school are often put into several small classes where teachers are also able to pay attention to each students.
In conclusion, it is obvious that large university is the optimal choice for students. Studying in the large campus, students could not only make more friends but learn more knowledge. These advantages would all contribute to students future career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'turns'.
Suggestion: turns
...ledge about one specific field. Then he turn to his university friends. It worked. H...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elds are quite prevalent in our campus. Once I had a chance to do a project with a p...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
... many specialists from other fields had join us. In contrast, small universities wou...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
... many specialists from other fields had join us. In contrast, small universities wou...
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Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...majors, which means that students would lost the chances to learn more. Admitted...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20646766169 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78045476314 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1922984047 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2083333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200793163952 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585448194489 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597101653871 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134473243918 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572122191324 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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