Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student. Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience. Which view do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Currently, people have a lot more chances to choose which types of schools they are going to enter. A glance at people's attitudes towards educational experience brings to the light question, namely, whether small colleges or large universities provide people a better educational experience. Was I forced to choose, I insist that students should give priority to large universities, and I will elaborate on my reasons in the following essay.
The first reason worth mentioning is that relationship developed in the large university could be extremely helpful for student in the future. To be more specific, large universities enable students to make more friends which is essential for their future development. Take my father as an example. When he was young, he got a chance to study in Wuhan University, an all-rounded school which has various excellent majors. During his four-year undergraduate career, he made countless friends from different majors. After his graduation, he established a company. He was quite struggled at first because his company involved several aspects but he just had knowledge about one specific field. Eventually, who made great contributions to his company are his university friends from different majors ,and now the company is quite profitable. Imagine that if my father chose to study in a small campus, he would not get the chance to make friends from different major, his company would not success as well.
Moreover, studying in large university, more often than not, means students are more likely to learn much knowledge. I major in biology in a large university which involves more than one hundred majors, and communication between different fields are quite prevalent in our campus. Last year, I had a chance to do a project with a professor. Even though the project is about agricultural science, after finishing the project, I surprisingly noticed that I had learned varieties of knowledge from the project since many specialists from other fields had joined us. In contrast, small universities would not be capable to involve various of majors, which means that students would lose the chances to learn more.
Admittedly, it is true that students in small school are more likely to be offered more individual attention. But students in the large universities also acquire almost the same individual attention as the small school students' , since students in large school are often put into several small classes where teachers are also able to pay attention to each students.
In conclusion, drawing upon what have been mentioned above, I strongly advocate that large university is the optimal choice for students. Since studying in large universities, as far as I am concerned, students could not only make more friends but learn more knowledge. And these advantages, apparently, would all contribute to students future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86858596598 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514161220044 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6453457297 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240306155701 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690833130876 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745187183907 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150180221042 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071666518631 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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