Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree?
Although every relationship has a certain rule and consideration for itself, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of the telling the truth and especially loyalty in a persistence of different relationships. Some people believe that we should always tell the truth without paying attention to a situation, on the other extreme of the rope, some believe that we should consider the situation precisely and then decide that whether telling the truth is right or not. Because they claim that sometimes telling the truth can not be a constructive element in the relationship and may destroy it. While both sides take their own positions, from my vantage point, the latter group carries more weight. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraph.
First, I deeply believe that sometimes telling the truth can play a role as a devastating weapon that may cause an irreparable and dangerous events. Actually, not only can not telling the truth help the relationship or the situation be better, but also may deeply destroy it and cause psychological depression such as isolation, fear of communication and maybe a heart attack. For example, last year my friend went to France to continue her education. After two months, unfortunately, her father got blood cancer. Her family did not call her immediately and said her ' your father is fine, do not worry'. Since she was studying hard for a very important exam and not want to disturb her, they lied her. I call this lie a noble lie.
The second reason coming to my mind is that sometimes by telling the lie we can use it as an advertisement tool in order to attract many customers and pursue them to buy their needs from our company. For example, many companies advertise and say that their products have special functions while they do not say the truth. It is one of the most famous, simplest and effective marketing and customer relationship management techniques that used by many companies widely to play an effective, economic and attractive role in today competitive business world.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad lookover the main points and discussion reveal the fact that, sometimes telling the truth may cause a dangerous and sad event such as heart attack. On the other hand, some persons and companies by telling the lie and avoiding telling the truth want to attract customers and show their products are perfect and finally earn much money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
...rous events. Actually, not only can not telling the truth help the relationship or the ...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...family did not call her immediately and said her your father is fine, do not worry....
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...id not call her immediately and said her your father is fine, do not worry. Since...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, then, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92214111922 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75383014914 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.921147462 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187992732434 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536702168549 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505027272722 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112785774216 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482296146313 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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