Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
People have long regarded honesty as one of the most important virtues in any interpersonal bond. Personally, I believe that always being truthful is the essential factor in all relationships. I feel this way for two main reasons, both of which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, complete honesty strengthens the trust between two people. When you tell your friends, your colleagues, or your family something truthful, the people you shared the truth with will feel exponentially more comfortable to confide in you. Therefore, you can make more meaningful connections with people you truly care about. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was younger, I used to have this strong, seemingly insurmountable one-sided affection for someone else. At first, I struggled over what to do with those overwhelming feelings. Moreover, I hesitated in sharing my story to my friends, fearing they could tattle-tale it to someone else. However, knowing that I could not keep my feelings to myself for that long, I began to tell one person after another. Soon enough, I started to feel like I have genuinely forged unbreakable bonds between me and the people I had confessed to. The majority of those bonds are still strong, even to this day.
Secondly, were I to persist in lying for too long, in order to hide an unsavoury truth, the consequences await will be more dire over time. If I were to tell the same lie repeatedly, I will get caught up in a web of deceit - a web that I have made. Soon enough, the truth will come out, and the anger, the fury and the frustrations will be multiple times larger than if I came clean in the first place. For instance, one of my classmates used to be one of the few people I could relate to in my class. However, to my surprise, I learned that she has been spewing lies and harmful rumours about one of our mutual friends, both within my class and throughout the entire school. Upon learning from this fact, I began to dissociate myself from her and her lies, and I terminated my close friendship with her. In hindsight, and taking the consequences of her actions into account, I considered myself wise to distance myself from such a toxic person and a pathological liar.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that always being honest is the most important cornerstone to all relationships. This is because being honest greatly strengthens bonds, and it brings about the least bad consequences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79342723005 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81147711677 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546948356808 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6484314961 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115134241782 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343146276162 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585505375791 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968449862463 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063493070599 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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