Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
I think honesty is one of the most important featurs between people. People have many charachteristics that have key roles in their relationships. Bad and good charachteristics make people personality and good features makes their relationships stable and as I said honesty is very important because of many reasons.
First of all, in my opinion all people must be honest. They should tell the truth. People make situation complex by telling lies. I knew a couple and they were very happy together. This couple were in love with each other. Before telling the story I have to say that parent's opinion about their chidrent's marriage is very important in my country and people need their parent's agrrement. This couple faced with a lot of problems before they get married. Their parents were object about their marriage and they were in difficultis. Finally, after seveal years, they married. But, after a one year the woman found a very teribel truth about her sweet love. She discovered that her husband bereyed her during those years that they were not married. The woman's heart was broken because of this dishonesty. Man did not have any explaination about this story, althugh he was regret. So, I think honesty and telling thtuth is very significand.
Additionally, we have to treat with others in the way that we expect them to treat us. I personally prefer honesty. So, I expect people around me to treat honestly with me and I do too. I think every action that we do in this huge world has consequences. If i believe in honesty and telling truth I should reflect it in my works. I have to teach my children honesty. We are all responsibl for our society. All of us want to live in a healthy society. Thus, we must spread this good carachteristics. what we do in society come bach to us. If we do good, goodness comes back to us and we do bad things, bad things come to us.
In a nutchel, I think telling the truth is hnesty, specially in relationships. we must consider it as a signifant part of our manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, honestly, if, so, thus, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64985994398 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71159455295 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9373692648 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3333333333 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132615539005 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373934521917 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681679278943 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885523163044 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463460805345 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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