Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is unquestionable that every person who is in a relationship want to do the best to develop it and strengthen it. Whether telling the truth all the time is essential or not for a relationship, though, it is a matter of intense debate. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that the trust is the foundations of any relationship; therefore, if you desire a solid union, telling the truth to your partner should be your priority. this position is based on two main reasons, that will be analyzed thoroughly below.
Firstly, not exist something that undermines more the trust of someone, that a lie. it means that, no one could demand trust, you must work hardly to obtain it and care it when some place it on you. For example, I had a girlfriend some years ago who lied me in a money situation. when I realized it, I inquired her about the it and she apologized, but I was never able to rely on her again. Consequently, the relationship died, owing to I did not want some next to me that was not trustworthy. No matter how many positive actions she did after that, always come to my mind that moment.
Secondly, solving an issue is more effortless when you count with the back up of your significant other. Otherwise, if something happens, and you hide it to your partner, someday he could know it and feel frustrated or bother, due to the distrust. An clarified example about this occurred me, a few months ago. I went into a terrible business and I lost a substantial amount of money. Then, I did not say nothing to my wife and I acquired a loan in a bank to cancel the debt. Notwithstanding, the monthly payment was so elevated that could no afford it, and I ended telling her the truth. Despite, we were able to gather enough capital to overcome the problem readily, she was disappointed, due to I hide her the problem.
In summation, I am of the opinion that the trust is the pillar of any long-lived relationship, so it is vital cultivate it. this is because lies destroy any bonds between person, no matter how strong it is, and it is less complicated face a problem with someone that support you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53746770026 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78123815472 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9037465568 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4210526316 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14521854639 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390318067022 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472651784616 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09373566556 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555916297356 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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