Because of modern life is so complex, it is important for people to ability to plan and organize
Since the dawn of civilization, having plan has had one of the greatest roles in people live from around the world, for it has had one of the most prominent influence in their lives. Although some people believe that other abilities are more important, I firmly concur the idea that having the ability to plan and organize is the most important part of our sophisticated lives. There are some reasons, the most important of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, it is undoubted that so influential have having plan been that it has had the number of positive effects on people's lives, yet above all it has helped people to become successful in their lives. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous prosperous people who do not waste their time duet to making wrong decision. Ability to having plan and organization lead people to use their time better. Take a personal experience as an example, there was a time that was master student and I had to do my master's thesis. Due to lack of having any plan for my work, I always made mistake and they took a lot of my time to correct my mistake resulting in I finished my work six month later than others students having plan for their work. I strongly believe that had I had plan for what I do in my daily activity, I would have finished my thesis sooner.
Second, it is established beyond doubt that on the one hand some people should boost other abilities such as collaborative and helpfulness which enable them to have a better relationship in their society, yet on the other hand, since, we are living in a complex era, it is better for people to be organized and doing everything based on their plan. Thus, I strongly agree with the latter point and I do believe that the more people being organized, the more they would have this chance to make better plan for their lives. By way of illustration, the noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that approximately 90% of people can no make a decision in the spur of time and they should think so much and investigate all positive and negative aspect of each decision before making it. As a result, being organized keep people away from probable failure because we are living in modern era and do not have enough time compensate wrong thing.
To make a long story short, by considering aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that no one can deny enormous positive effect of being organized on people's complex lives. Not only are they able to become prosperous in their lives, but also they can keep themselves from mistake and wasting time in order to correct mistakes. For this reasons, I highly recommend that parents teach they children how to make plan for their lives to become successful in our modern epoch
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: HAVE_HAVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have been having'?
Suggestion: have been having
...st, it is undoubted that so influential have having plan been that it has had the number of...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ake resulting in I finished my work six month later than others students having plan ...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... time in order to correct mistakes. For this reasons, I highly recommend that parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, thus, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67820773931 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5528538403 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466395112016 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8959079466 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5625 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6875 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290608965042 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105757213956 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070996601804 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189150874812 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037406045726 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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