What would a new comer like and dislike about your town
We are living in a sophisticated age which facilities have a profound impact on individual's life. People are always trying to choose a place for living that make their lives more convenient, delightful, exciting. Every town have various advantages and disadvantages that a new comer may like or dislike There are some reasons for everything, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
my town is Tehran and it is also the capital of Iran. There are alot of advanced stores and shopping malls here bringing people several lucrative consequences. I am certain that new comer does not have any problem to buy something and also i guess he/she will have profusion to choose everything. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous people coming our town from different part of our country to make purchase because they good are high quality and also are up-to-date. Although it is difficult for them to make purchase between many products, what results from these luxury shopping malls are to give people a great deal of choice to buy something. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that the high percentage of people living in our town, are ones who are satisfied and happy due to access this stores because enable them to experience better life.
I should say one of the most important disadvantages of our town to help new comer has better insight about our town. Traffic is the most negative aspects of our town. Since alot of people are living in our town, we have traffic most of time especially at morning or evening. The modern world offers abundant examples of people who suffer from many diseaes which stem from the traffic. I am sure that this condition will bother new comer. For this reason, if I were to be a determiner in our town, i would have made a decision which people do not use their own car in the morning and the evening. In addition to aforementioned notes, there are a well-know proverb in Persian, the equivalent of which in English may sound like this"the more you live in a polluted town, the less the tourists would come to your town. The proverb clarifies the fact that air pollution and other negative effect will radically decrease the rate of turists coming our town.
To make long story short, no one can deny that each city has alot of good and bad characterestics. People should choose each town based on their personality and monetary issues. For this reason, i highly recommended that new comer investigate all negative and positive aspects of each town before going there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, i guess, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84304932735 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64359949903 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511210762332 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.83574556 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253035403684 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073643670326 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715875764676 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142476023137 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597496646746 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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