the most important problems of today's world can be solved in our lifetime
We are living in a sophisticated age which people face many problems that have a profound impact on individual's life. Governments are always trying to make their people lives more convenient, delightful, and successful. Some people believe that the most important problems of our today's life will not be solved in our lifetime, while others are convinced that these problems can be solved in a lifetime. After carefully pondering it from several various aspects, I strongly agree with the latter idea. There are some reason, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, obviously, one of the most important problems that people encounter with them is burning fossil fuels. As a matter of fact, if governments invest a great deal of money in producing of renewable energy, they will produce renewable energy such as electricity from solar panels and wind turbines or even bioelectric cars. The procedure of producing electricity from these methods eventually takes 20 years of mankind's time. Although these kinds of energy may not provide a lot of energy for all of a country, what results from producing these types of energy are to help to overcrowded to prevent the greenhouse effect from the atmosphere. Because the amount of greenhouse effect in the countryside and villages is so low and there is no any threat from them. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that the production of electric cars took just 10 years of governments time and there are 100000 electric cars in our town that have great contribution to limitation of effect green house.
The second reason why I agree with it is that, undoubtedly, construction of many infrastructures for overcrowded cities such as our town is to solve the traffic problems. In fact, by constructing several subway line, the traffic problem can be solved forever. Besides decreasing the amount of air pollution, it helps people to save their time and money. Since a lot of people can not afford to use taxi or have own car, it can be very helpful for them. Hence, were I be a determiner in our country, I have constructed especial routes for people wanting to go to their destination without any delaying. all of these decision are perform-able under 50 years and governments are able to bring several lucrative consequences by making a great decision and investing a great deal of money.
To make a long story short, no one can deny that it is an obligatory task for governments to provide great facilities for citizens. Not only are these problems solvable in short time, but also it can be helpful for the next generation. For this reason, I highly recommended that governments can solve many people's problems easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...problems that have a profound impact on individuals life. Governments are always trying to ...
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Line 2, column 746, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ide and villages is so low and there is no any threat from them. The noteworthy in...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...their destination without any delaying. all of these decision are perform-able und...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation without any delaying. all of these decision are perform-able under 50 years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, while, in fact, in short, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98264642082 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84427525107 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5413715999 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.85 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250223639562 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823739888801 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111356494038 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169340065802 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867281940926 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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