Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Since the progress in technology and the appearance of modern day life, it has been of a great importance for people and institutes to find a way to optimize their avenues. Nowadays, the most important aspect of the contemporary era is its complexity. I, personally believe that one reasonable way to manage this aspect is to have a good plan and scheam for your life, otherwise, you will lose rather than gaining from this reasourcefull modrn era. According, in what followes, I will delve into the most conspecuous reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
First and formost, at this era we can see the presence of many social applications such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagaram which their users are mostly young generation. Due to these applications, youth spent a lot time on them which can easily be out of their hand. To deal with this problem which lots of people specially young ones are concerned about it, is to be capable to have agood plan and be able to organize your time. As a case in point, I can remember a time around 10 years ago which I was studying for the university entrance exam in my country. At that time I was recently have been introduced to Instagram. It was really attractive and interesting to me which I spent most of my day tome scrolling in the App instead of studying. As a result I did not get accept to any university and I had to study for another year.
The second equally important reason is that if young generation be able to plan their time and scadual oand order their stuffs, it will help them to maximize their gain of the modern life. To be mpre specific, If they be able to plan and have a short term and long term goals and organize their time due to that, they will be prone to get what they want and also enjoy their lives. For example, I my youngest brother really like to play video games and also he is very ambitios in his education. Therefore he had planed to stuy the daytime and play video games with his friends at night.
All in all, in my point of view having a good planing ability will help everyone especially the young generation to reach their goals at this modern era. This is because it will help them to not waste their time due to all the social media applications and they can enjoy their lives more by a ability to organze their tome.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: an
... and they can enjoy their lives more by a ability to organze their tome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47887323944 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48033994168 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0021419787 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185244962225 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575020785147 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511652427408 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115046448675 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175926324942 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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