Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
With rocketing development of modern society, advances in technology have made it possible for people to live a convenient and colorful life, in which they can have easy access to all the information, commodities, and resources they need. Thus some individuals suppose that people are happier than before, while others hold the opposite idea. From my perspective, I am in favor of the latter one.
Admittedly, living in modern society means people can enjoy benefits brought by technology, such as purchasing goods in another country without stepping out their house, reaching to a far area within several hours by plane. Thus, some people seem to live under the illusion that they equate convenience with happiness. However, they fail to take into account the fact that along with the convenience, more stress appears in our lives, which exerts passive effects on our emotions.
For one thing, increasing work stress have, to some extent, disturbed our normal lives with our families. Nowadays, it is common to see that mothers take their children to go to school, to play. The father, who has to support daily expense, endeavor themselves to work harder and harder, and spend tons of time in their works, in order to provide a pleasant life condition to his kid and wife. The fathers are under great pressure because they cannot afford being fired. Thus, they merely have the access to enjoy the happy time with their families.
Furthermore, people are experience more estrangement recently. People in increasing number have felt that they have few friend that are true friends. The interpersonal relations just collapse over time as the consequence of the development of technology. An illustrating example is that what happens on the way to work. Standing on the subway, it is common that everyone around just look at their cell phone, can low their heads. At times, some old man or lady need a seat, people besides can just ignore this or they merely can see it.
Based on the discussion above, in spite of the convenience from the rapid development of modern society, the pressure along with it just make people less happy. And the disadvantages far outweigh its positive sides and will play a significant role on our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
..., commodities, and resources they need. Thus some individuals suppose that people ar...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...eat pressure because they cannot afford being fired. Thus, they merely have the acces...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'few friends'.
Suggestion: few friends
...reasing number have felt that they have few friend that are true friends. The interpersona...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'such as', 'for one thing', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234042553191 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.1536643026 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0780141843972 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425531914894 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0685579196217 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13475177305 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0330969267139 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60782263251 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0378250591017 0.0309702414327 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00472813238771 0.00188951952338 250% => OK
Determiners: 0.0756501182033 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016548463357 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118203309693 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2240.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 373.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00536193029 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356568364611 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235924932976 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166219839142 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104557640751 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60782263251 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592493297587 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 69.9118097321 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6315789474 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6138391156 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.894736842 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.224072245 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.51785714286 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30638539272 0.300154397459 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.084344073917 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0750560392831 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485230256894 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150040906381 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113615521322 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558479687078 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285038975558 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0279491854354 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200757922532 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411335729817 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.