Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Happiness, the thing most people strive for, has been valued and triggers heated discussions over whether people now are less happy and satisfied with their lives than in the past due to the rapidly changing world. This fast development, in some people's view, makes people feel gratified. On the contrary, my perspective is that people nowadays are less delightful than decades ago.
To begin with, never should we ignore that the rapid development of technology makes contemporary adults feel more exhausted than before. First, successively updating knowledge forces people to learn new things continuously. To be more specific, in order to locate a career, students have to obtain more expertise and simultaneously learn how to apply the knowledge they have just learned to practice. For example, with the advent of the computer, people in many fields are supposed to learn basic computer knowledge in order to manipulate the machine or use professional software to boost their work efficiency. This urges people to allocate more time to studying than before, making people feel tired and less delighted. Besides, the new technology also makes employees feel pressure because one day they may be replaced by machines. For instance, autonomous driving technology has become more and more mature. It is possible that the advanced robot will replace most drivers. In such circumstances, people may suffer from pressure since they are likely to lose their jobs. However, people in the past don't have such feelings because human labor is necessary and indispensable.
In addition, the development of society also increases people's desire for higher life quality. In detail, nowadays people will not feel satisfied if they are just not hungry. Instead, they crave a more colorful and convenient life than before, because they have the opportunity to achieve such lives if they work diligently or even work overtime. For example, not only may adults today work hard to earn money to give themselves a better life such as living in large houses, eating delicious food, going traveling on weekends, but they also tend to try their best to provide their parents with constant medical care and give their parents access to a well-rounded education. Obviously, modern people desire more in materials and mental than those decades ago, which makes them more fatigue and less contented. As a result, current people are more likely to find it laborious to fulfill their requirements compared with those in the past.
In conclusion, people are definitely less happy and satisfied than before due to the fast developing technology as well as the growing desire of modern people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...their jobs. However, people in the past dont have such feelings because human labor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66084298968 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1027173319 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378988093252 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121402257194 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107532529811 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282838400952 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12258759525 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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