best thing in life is do not coast any money.do you agree or disagree with this statement. explain your reasons and example.
Best thing in life is do not cost any money.
Nowadays, money is important to buy anything. People do work and study for earn money. Because if people don’t earn enough money then they cannot fulfill their ambitions and wishes. Even for basic needs people want money like house,cloths,foods and other things. So, I believe that anything in life cost money. I feel this way because of many reasons which I will explain further.
Firstly,everyone wants to live a good life. The People need enjoyment and want to live a luxurious life. For instance,youngsters work hard to get good job and good salary so they could fulfill their wishes. If anyone interested in doing activities then it costs money. There are many kinds of activities like scuba diving, boating and other types of adventures. These give the enjoyment to the people.
Secondly,education is necessary to live a good life .Education gives prosperity, intelligence as well as good skills . But people need money for education. For example, In these days almost all universities are private universities. so everyone needs to pay fees for admission. Even they have to spend money in books ,living expenses and in transport services.
Thirdly, Money is essential to fulfill wishes of family members .For example, Parents want to give best education to their children. Other than this they want to give best future. So parents needs money for that. Good house and car which is essential for live happily together. It is not true that happiness do not need money, Because to make family happy we need to fulfill their all requirements and it is costs money.
However, there are many other things in life which do not cost any money. Our relationships with family and friends which are based on our relations which do not need money. Love from family and friends which we do not need to buy. Spend a good time with family and memorize our old memories these all things give us enjoyment still we do not need to pay any money.
In conclusion, money is essential for our life . Everything which we need in life it costs money but some relationships which are based on feelings they are free. Because we cannot feel it by money.
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...ch are based on feelings they are free. Because we cannot feel it by money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84533333333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7553490087 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445333333333 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0725046661 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5666666667 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03333333333 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250515434889 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848457918466 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902529800526 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175656323866 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123889555955 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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