do you agree or disagree that young people should take opinion from famous personalities rather than older people.
Nowadays, youngsters are succeeding in every field. Famous personalities can be a good example for the young people who are going to start their career. Although, the plethora of people believes that advice from older are more important than anyone else, i personally believe that, famous personality's opinion is better. I feel this way for few reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, well known person has been gone through same situation from which young people are going through. So, they can understand better rather than anyone else. For instance, it is not easy to achieve a desire goal. Every celebrity has been gone through many obstacles in his life. Therefore, they better know how to handle the bad situation and how to come over from that. However, one could not take help from older people. Because sometime they are not able to give better solution as they had not gone through same condition.
Secondly, prestigious people are more experienced with current scenario. In the modern life there is more competition in every field, so they can guide better to the youngsters. For example, if someone is interested in film industry, but he is confuse about what he needs to do before enter in the film industry. This can be well answered by who is known about film industry well. So, they can give better advice rather than anyone else. Despite this possibility event though young people take help from older people, then they are not aware about this kind of things.
In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it actually more beneficial for youngsters to take opinion from well known person, because prestigious people are always better in practical things which are related to recent situation in their particular field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96732026144 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4520172099 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5157671816 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265358114706 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784122246195 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861163243903 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169850568116 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421400903044 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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