The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. (not mine)
In the past decade, the issue of whether it is better to travel in a group or travel alone has received a great deal of attention from travelers and travel agencies. Although some may say that traveling alone helps people to become independent; I as well as many others, believe that going on a trip in a group which is guided by a tour leader can be more enjoyable as in addition to being efficient and affordable.
First of all, an important reason why traveling in a group is better is that group traveling is more economic. Going on a trip have a lot of expenses, but being in a group can reduce some of them. For example, a group can rent a van or a bus for in town transportation which will have less cost for each person than using taxies. Furthermore, many hotels, restaurants or even public places like museums and zoos have discount for reserving in a group. Due to these kinds of cost reductions, many experts believe that group traveling is more economically beneficial.
Another reason for this idea is that traveling in a group can be more enjoyable. When people are traveling in this way, they are able to do a lot of group activities which makes that trip joyful. For instance, they can play group games or go on camping, and everybody knows that these types of entertainments are more enjoyable when more people do them together. In addition, some psychologists mention that spending time with a group of friends, helps people forget their problems and become relieved.
Finally, it is occasionally said that going on a trip with a group is the best because the presence of the tour guide helps to have a well-organized trip. In the most of the trips, people are new in that town or even country. In these kind of situations, having a tour leader, who knows that place very well, help the travelers to visit better places and schedule their time more efficiently according to the visiting times of famous places in that city.
To sum up, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that the best way of traveling is traveling in a group chiefly due to better planning and being more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...re new in that town or even country. In these kind of situations, having a tour leader, wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64566929134 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69334568013 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9463334195 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333779151863 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12236927542 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815221643767 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206435847303 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465710105205 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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